after looking at my animation i have established that a few scenes felt out of place, i have since discovered all the scenes that were working have a very dramatic feel while the others felt flat, after taking this into consideration i changed a few of the scenes to a more dramatic camera angle and and thought a lot more about what the scene was trying to achieve, when i was story boarding out this idea everything looked ok but introducing the 3d element and lighting changed a lot more than i had anticipated

i have also changed the flat walk scene, i have been very open with how much i have struggled with this scene it never felt like it was part of the same animation, it looked like a dream sequence or a flash back and just never felt right, after discovering what i mention earlier i did the same thing and picked a dramatic angle where i could show and achieve the the same goal which has worked very well, and I'm finally happy with the outcome 

finally i have also omitted the second walk scene, after showing it to a lot of people the overwhelming reply was that if felt out of place and just wasn't that necessary to explain what was happening in the story since removing it i have to agree it feels a lot better to watch and the pacing now feels cohesive  

working towards a cohesive feel you will also notce from the pics above number 1 and 3 are similar in the angles and direction of the action